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Glass

I stare into a glass of water,
And watch the waves hitting the sides,
Pretending that I am but for a moment a God,
Responsible for all that live in those shores,
I am tempted to rock the glass from side to side,
Thinking of all they who would feel the storm,
A Tsunami killing their world in a second,
And all so I could have a moment of fun.


P D Dawson (darkimagination)

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  • Sinners Nightmare
    January 17
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    You call mine an excellent observation? yours is truly amazing how you take something like a glass of water that most mortals take for granted and don't even give it a second glance and put your heart and soul into it and turn it into something as great as a thunderous sea controlled by an awesome and all-mighty god. truly that takes talent. brava!!


  • hawkeslake gold member
    January 9

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    Yow!

    Now that's a powerful image! I'll try NOT to think about a god playing with a glass as I try to sleep -- LOL. Really a good write!


  • HaleyMary
    September 3, 2007

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    Interesting write. How we get inspired by the little things, like looking at a glass of water sometimes. This was well written with fantastic imagery. Thanks for sharing this write.


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 3, 2007

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    When we stare into water or into fire, we are mesmerized and it is as if we are transported elsewhere - as in this poem. Unique take on the title- glass. Tsunami from a glass of water is quite creative.