Gem
opaque, translucent ,
capturing , concealing , embracing,
drawing , description, depth, beauty
imitating, dazzling, shinning
gleaming, sparkling
jewel
Author notes
Form #2-Diamente:
Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subect
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subect
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subect, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject
A contest entry
- Form Contest by countrybabe.
525 points, ended December 7, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Not A Bad Effort
This is not a bad effort at all. You did well with the given form. I am sorry you didn't get a decent form to show your true writing skills, but thems the breaks. Anyways, thank you for entering and good luck.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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thank
I wanted to come back to this one, but didn't have time with school and kids back in school. Loss of time. Thank u for allowing me to stay in the contest and critiquing my poem.Saddie23
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HA!
K-mart Had A Fire Sale On Gerunds? Good news, where you have shinning, I think you can put shining and then enlarge the "ing" back to its normally scheduled size. Artistically the words have merit, but linguistically the poem lacks a little bit of punch. I realize you were constrained by some goofy contest rules, so that's not to be held against ya I guess
Best of luck in your future writing endeavors.
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Unusual style
I can't say that I understand this. all I can figure out is that these are discriptions of your dream car. If that is the case it turned out well.
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