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Let the Music

Screams of strings
Wood laid symbol crash still rings

Base beat thumps like rhythmic heart

All gather and spray like a slow motioned sneeze
breaking the breeze rather sweetly

Making you feel
Making wonder real

Hear
into what's clear

Take the music through the day
prey upon its tones
that loan you a piece of peace

All in ease
Without beg of please

You listen one more time
to the rhythm and the rhyme


of song

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 3, 2009

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    LOLOLOLOL I just love your rhythem and rhyme, yes this was very wonderful. It is wonderfully written.