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Autumn


When the leaves on the trees
are falling, and the love
you feel is now fading
what can you do
but hold on
tighter.

[And try not to forget that in the end
we will be free]

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  • Forlorn Dreams
    September 3, 2007
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    Well its a beautiful poem. Very sweet message, and I really like the reference to Autumn, its my favorite season. But it has nothing to do with either prompt and its over 30 words ... So you have no chances of winning the contest. I'm sorry. If you'd like to remove this from the contest and re-enter thats perfectly fine.

    Kelcey


    • CianLOVES
      September 3, 2007
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      1, I already did remove it, I didn't read it properly. and 2, it does however have 30 words. Or it does by my word count.