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Followed by an angel


When I heard her story
I had just got of bed
Couldn’t believe what I saw
the things that what being said
My eyes filled up straight away
as I saw the picture of her face
They said she had been abducted,
taken away to a secret place
I couldn’t believe the story,
in my heart I held hope and drive
To pray for her every day
until she was found alive!
And although even now she’s still missing
and nowhere to be found
Someone somewhere knows something
they will have seen her around!
My spirit goes out to her family
and I’m sure everyone feels the same
You have a beautiful angel
and you aren’t the ones to blame
One day you will see her again I promise
to hold her a squeeze her tight
You will be able to guide and assure her
that now things will be alrite
People should spread the love
and to use there eyes to see
And if you’re not near use your words
to power her story like me
I know someone’s watching her
Guiding her home, safe all the way

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    April 21, 2008
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    This is a lovely, heartfelt poem about this little girl. You have written this wonderfully with so much love and compassion that comes shining through your words. Congratulations on winning the silver trophy. It is much deserved and for a great cause.


  • getsbetter
    October 8, 2007
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    Beautiful, I loved it! and it is a contender...GETS


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    October 6, 2007

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    I have taken into consideration the last two lines that have not appeared in your poem, it is very heartfelt...

    I can relate to how you felt when the news broke about little Maddy, your words are full of hope, and hope is so important to her parents and everyone that has prayed for her return...you have done well to express what heppened for the reader...thank you for your kind support...

    ~Lilac~


  • crystallynnbradford
    September 7, 2007
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    this is very touching and I'm sure her family would appreciate reading this piece a lot.


  • K1r5ty
    September 3, 2007
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    at the end of the poem it was supposed to read
    Maddy McCann in our hearts
    And forver there she will stay

    sorry bout that people dont no whats happened!!!!!

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