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Forbidden Lover

Slowly he crept to the bed

She lay in sweet slumber

Watching her momentarily

Thinking of what he wanted to do to her.

Pulling the sheet from her body

He ran his hand slowly up her leg

creeping ever so closer to that sweet spot.

She awoke; and saw him

she beckoned him to her

They met with such an explosion of lust

climbing higher and higher they reached the peak

They lay side by side spent and weak

Until she spied his cloven feet

and screamed My god, Why have thou forsaken me

Her lover said I am  your  master  now

Bow down on bended knee

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    September 16, 2007
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    Now that is dark and creepy! Surprise ending! Exciting read!

    Blessings~
    Az


  • Despairkitty
    September 4, 2007

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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    Well I must say I didnt quite expect the ending that you had. Different to say the least. I am a greeter and wanted to welcome you to the site. Feel free to ask me any questions.
    Despair