I sit in my room and remember the times we shared
The times we made love in the bed i still sleep in
Its hard to forget the happiness we had when all i have
Is my heart felt with loneliness, the pain you left
When you pushed me out of your life.
I never wanted to leave but you kept pushing me
I left with tears in my eyes, and emptiness in my heart.
But now i look back and see the happiness i had and now thats
What i live on for now and forever.
I will never love you again but did you have to leave me with
LONELINESS?
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sad and filled with pain, well expressed!thanks for entering and good luck!
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what he did was wrong and i dispize him for it a heart is not a toy to be played with, i'm always around and in your mind if you need to talk.
Love Mark. -
ever so tiny question:
is “my heart felt with loneliness”
or “filled with loneliness”?
Your poem realistically expresses how a person
might feel when a relationship ends
before they
were ready. We just DO NOT want to hear that
it will be better later. Good work.
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I love it so much feling
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u know who this is about.....u were good friends of his
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Oh, loneliness, the problem of our world...
Even within a place filled with ppl, we feel alone coz the one we love is not there, bad feelings or worst as we may say...
& U expressed it very well
Thnx for ur entry & Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Heba
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