Floating silently in the ocean blue
Till I heard a voice of an angel that angel was you.
Sitting alone quiet and depresed
I showed up and eased your stress.
Your shimmering eyes and beautiful skin
Was all that i need to want to come in.
Into your heart I wanted to fall
Deeply in love just like them all.
Out at sea we were all alone
Till I asked you if you wanted to go home.
Together we went out into the blue
But no matter where we went I would never stop loving you.
Author notes
Poem used Somewhere Out to Sea
A contest entry
- Answer Me Back pt 2! by Kylaya Halon.
450 points, ended September 28, 2007, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awwww! that was so beautiful...sniff sniff
I'm sure it made all the girls do the same lol. I love the flow and the imagery here. Its just...awwwww lol there it is agaiN! great work on this piece keep up the excellent work.
And May Your Muse Forever Inspire You...
K.V
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how cute, beautiful and sweet!
I love this poem... it is so magical and pretty. I like the idea of how you met at sea, I usually find the sea or the beach to be a romantic place.. plus the 'angel'
this is fantastic and very nicely written..
Drop by soon and post more ok?
Keep on writing,
Nooni
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awww, this is sweet. Didn't think you had it in you, babe. how cute. Love it.
Shade
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awww Jstin that's so sweet and goood!!! I love it ^-^
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I will read your poem put i need you to put the info i asked for in the Author's Box before the contest is complete...
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Awwwwwwwwwww! This is so sweeeeet! I'm squealing! I really can't speak. Even the rhyme is good. The imagery captured my attention (you know how active my imagination is). This is really special. You should frame it and give it to Miss Amanda as a present.
♥ Aiyoris Venii Aaklinan
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