They cuddle in embrace
Kiss under the moon light
Loving eachother deeply
Everything feels so right
His hands linger up her thigh
Bring her skirt to her hip
The lighthouse horn goes off
Signaling the nearby ship
He kisses her neck
She nibbles on his ear
The fog starts to surround them
Not a person is near
The feeling of excitment
A jolt of thirst
He had to have her
Or he was going to burst
There bodies entwined
Both in a trance
Their temperatures rising
Their hands doing a dance
Connected as one
The fireworks start
The love they made
Fills one anothers heart
Author notes
Well I tried.
A contest entry
- Im in the mood for love by mantis180.
700 points, ended September 23, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - come take a look! please?? (rhyming contest!) by nobodys-girl.
400 points, ended July 16, 237 entries
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Comments
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I think this is so sweet, beautiful and just full of love. it sounds like the perfect moment... thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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An excellent try, I thought it was quite nicely done. Very good description and well paced.

-ASh


