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When two become one

They cuddle in embrace
Kiss under the moon light
Loving eachother deeply
Everything feels so right

His hands linger up her thigh
Bring her skirt to her hip
The lighthouse horn goes off
Signaling the nearby ship

He kisses her neck
She nibbles on his ear
The fog starts to surround them
Not a person is near

The feeling of excitment
A jolt of thirst
He had to have her
Or he was going to burst

There bodies entwined
Both in a trance
Their temperatures rising
Their hands doing a dance

Connected as one
The fireworks start
The love they made
Fills one anothers heart



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  • nobodys-girl
    June 28

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    I think this is so sweet, beautiful and just full of love. it sounds like the perfect moment... thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • mantis180
    September 11, 2007

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    An excellent try, I thought it was quite nicely done. Very good description and well paced.

    -ASh