Please take the burning sensation from my hands
Place it close to your wings of gold and silver skins
Sweet~surrender under pressure
Soul~tender to heal within
Like beathing out, almost breathing in
Stay around me
Stay
Stay
Please release this desire
This complex needing
Yearning
To fly, with you into hidden depths
Of saturated dreams, losing control of soul~senses
Almost breathing in
Caught in serenity
Soul~searching my senses
I ask you to stay
Catch my breath between your teeth and tongue
Feel it burn
Feel the passion rising
Once more, once again
I ask you
Stay
Stay
Stay around, I may not say the words
I may not offer things first
But just a kiss from you
Sweet~surrender under pressure
Love given measure for measure
All I can offer
Is hidden in the depth of my kiss
So please
Take this burning pleasure from my hands
And stay around
Forever
IN
THE FIRE
OF
WANTON
LUST
Author notes
sap.. sap.. and more SAP ..for all those sap lovers out there
Written September 20th, 2003
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Gill
Oh girlie, this is yummy SAP, the best kind
Lots of soft and sensual images, and I really liked the red-hot ending
Karen
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Yep... its sappy, sorta a "girl song" as my son would say...lol But personally, i love those songs :-)
Beautiful flow here, its so very lyrical, could be set to music easily i think. Nicely done, enjoyed this much,
~ Wendy -
I hope you love the way you put in wordss.....veryyyyy HOT....greattt :-))
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How sweet. This isn't what I call hot, or raunchy, but the vibe here can not be denied. drools It brought some fantastically naughty images to mind. This Alice song didn't help either. lol
Take another sip
Let it kiss your lips and
Let a little drip on
Your thighs
STAR ME KITTEN, YOU ARE WILD!!!!!! -
How yummy !! So much sensuality expressed...dangerous to be
reading this at this early hour !! The imagination wanders....
" I may not offer things first
But just a kiss from you "...
Get in there woman !!!
Love the way you have put this together...leaves so much
to the imagination as well as expressing some rather deep
routed desires
Ps. Annie Lennox is superb. I grew up with her music...
~ sonia ~ -
Thanks Reenie.. just tinkered with the end..hope you liked that too
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Loved every word of this SAP <---- Reading this , one could feel the sensuality in the air and hear the words left unspoken , and besides sensuality it also spoke of so much longing from somewhere deep inside the heart and soul Great write !!!!
Reenie
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Beautifully sensual poem ~~ very vivid and nice structure. Enjoyed reading this poem. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Melody
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I really liked this poem. The way you put the words was perfect to make me feel as living that dream. I'll have something to think about tonight... even if will be just a dream, it will be mine.
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This is very beautiful I love: catch my breath between your teeth and tongue
Mmm, very lovely over all--I'll be reading more of your work!
-mary -
I have a sexy little smirk on my face right now tee hee Ah! How I know this feeling so well. I absolutely love the passion you get from being in love from someone, how when your alone you just can't hold in the passion, you just wanna rape them like an animal lol. I enjoyed reading this. It was truly filled with passion and you could feel the want, the lust and it's hard to do that with erotica. In all honesty though I didn't like the ending, it just didn't fit with the rest and didn't give a real boom to the end, just gave you a bored, blah end. But besides this I liked it. Keep up the good work!
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excellent
"All I can offer
Is hidden in the depth of my kiss
So please
Take this burning pleasure from my hands"very beautiful and truistic expression intense love which but mute, but only exchange in intense loving contact-the kiss. the kiss is the first love message! very nice write. thank you for sharing!
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Thanks girls
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ooooooooooooooo.. nice!
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OK Me first
Yeah......
I indeed have burning pleasure in my hands sis
I need someone to stay with me tho lollololol
Ah tis not sap
Its beautifully worded and structured sis
Me thinks I need to go outside now and cool off
No one to stay with me & share my buring desires
Loved this one hun
Luv you too
Susan~~~~
Edited on Sep 20, 7:49 p.m. because '~ duh error of course~'.
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