Baby, at night
i think of you
and sometimes during the day
I dont know what to do.
your always on my mind,
and its getting harder to let go
to concentrate on things i should
harder to not let it show.
At night,
when im all alone, about to go to bed
i try to clear my thoughts
but you pop into my head
and your the last person i think about
and your the last person i want to see
and i wish sometimes
that you too were thinking about me
Author notes
not very good i dont think..but it was a quick, omg guess what pop-ed in my head thing.sorry i havent written for awhile ;/
Please tell me what you think
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omg. How can you think that this isnt very good???? dont be so harsh on yourself. this is a beautiful piece, I love it. It flowed so smoothly and because you kept the rhyming scheme simple it adds to the whole romance of it, as if someone has left it beside their bed in a letter.
Its is also as if you have written what I have needed to say to someone, but couldnt find the words. Is it alright if I send this too them, I wil put your name on it of course.
All the best
~Hollow~
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