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PassionsPromise (Acrostic)

Pure heaven in my heart and soul,
A woman that consumes my thoughts and feelings wholly.
Smart, funny, a good Mother to her kids,
Sensual, sexy, seductive, she makes me smile when I think of her.
Intense feelings about things, filled with conviction,
Ornery when she feels like it and I love that about her too.
Never turning down a hand held out for help,
She will give you her all to lift you up.

Passionate about her spirituality and love for God,
Reveling in His word and teaching it to
Others through her acts and deeds.
My love, my life, my AP wife.
Intending nothing but joy and happiness for all,
She gives of herself constantly,
Expecting nothing in return but respect.

Author notes

"I will love you until the end of time"
Griswold

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  • Irish-rain
    September 5, 2007

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    i like it

    i like the ay you describe all the positives. It's a lot better when you enjoy what you're writing about.... BRAVO!!!


  • Simple-Fairytale
    September 3, 2007

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    This is really sweet. Makes me wish my boyfriend could write poetry. This is a beautiful piece. Thank you for entering and following the rules. I appriciate it, and good luck : ]


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 3, 2007

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    awww this was beautiful
    and really shined out the real her
    i loved it well done
    its beautifully done
    best of luck


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 3, 2007
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    oh yea you know i did lol

  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 3, 2007

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    this was beautiful my dear.
    I am touched by this piece. Your an
    amzing man makes it easy to be happy with
    you on my arm. I love the author notes as well.
    For this Ap wife thing, well, lets say, is a good heads
    up. I need you as much as you need me,
    we are stuck together my darling,
    yes you guessed it,
    Until The End of Time.
    I love you Griswold.

    Your Wife, (ap?? blah blah blah)
    PassionsPromise...(Tory)

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