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Step into my Shoes

Step into my shoes
and feel what Im feelin,
hurt like I am hurting
feel the pain that is burning
me all up inside,
and tell me how it feels and why?

Step into my shoes
can you handle it all at once?
Can you see the outsode story?
Can you fight the battle and end with the glory?
Can you look me in the eye and say your not weak?
Can you really tel me life isn't looking too mean?

Step into my shoes
breath the air that Im breathing,
seek help where noone is seeking.
Look at the world with a new meaning.
Tell me that your colour isnt black and dark
that your heart is without wounds or any marks.

Step into my shoes
into a small glass box,
and tell me you dont feel like your trapped.
tell me you feel like a traveler without a map,
No highway no road no right way to follow,
your stuck inside with your heart empty and hollow
frozen hard, cold like a stone
noone inside of you, your feelin alone.
Suffocating, too difficult too hard to breath,
weakened by the pain, down on your knees.

Step into my shoes
and feel the pain in your chest,
your world upside down and your mind is a mess.
Make yourself at home, Im inviting you in
let me warn you there will be a feeling of dim.

Step into my shoes
get ready for the ride,
cause when your not prepared
off your feet they might fly.
Naked and bare for everyone to see.
You'll feel the pain
you'll know what I mean.

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  • Rheea gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    talented beyond words

    19 is so young to hurt this much I did too you are really good the best I have read on here period. Forget my entry in your contest. Do not be like me and wait until you are 52 to stop the pain look plea towards the heavens not toward hell. Jesus loves you I promise he does.Please be happy I pray good comes to you. I applaud your talent I cry for your pain. When you can write beauty
    please let me see .anything I can do to help let me know....Rhea