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A Hopeless Inadept

With so many wishes
Of things never seen
With wanting and watching
What I've never been

My happiness fading
Yet not quite enough
With kindness and anger
And unsure to bluff

A mass of insecurity
And hopeless as I am
My life, an unknown factor
To me, I ama sham

Always hiding away
To those who won't accept
The fearful, strange, peculiar
The soft inadept

Watching all my betters
And those lesser things
Staying in the shadows
To see what fame brings

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  • Skawe
    September 3, 2007

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    You're amazing, or you just hide your insecurity well.

    This is amazing, but then again, I wouldn't expect any less from you. I agree with bubu, but honestly, you're already on your way to fame chicka. and im so proud of yooooooooouuu! can't wait til you visit.

  • LookIntoTheAir
    September 3, 2007

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    I love this poem and all the emotions. It's very sad, but I think I know the feeling of watching everyone else succeed while you just sit there and watch. Goooood poem
    <3 Rosa