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Irrigate my worst attributes.
Fatten rich piggies from the profitable oils.

Hello, Pot.
My name is Kettle.

Sickening blackness—no,
Sickening blackness—no,

Sickening daylight evaporates melodrama,
Inspires pseudo-intellect instead.

But jealousy is your best.
Stay out late—keepin’ it real.

False teeth supplant false eyelashes and false
Hope of prospective bliss.

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  • risewiththesmoke
    December 2, 2007
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    good job


  • HeavenScent4U
    October 31, 2007

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    i would say that this is anti-establishment from the beginning of how it started but not sure so i will just say best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • Malabu
    October 7, 2007

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    strange write

    my ignorance may be my bliss....profound are my thoughts rumble...and still I am with wonder...I sometimes ramble and think the world should understand me...and then I think...Im glad they dont
    thanks for entering


  • Heart Sutra
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for sharing this poem with the contest.