Sprawled
on silk linens,
Her residual warmth
stirred
Scents
filtered while inhaling,
rebirthing touch against skin
Flavor
assaulted tongue,
arresting buds awakened
Quivers
submission erupted
like goose bumps,
raising bridge without toll
Escaping
whimpers pranced
fracturing silent dream
Loins
feather touch aflamed
Free
like eagle in the wild
rapidly rising...
then plummetting
Author notes
Prompt: * Rotating Memories
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by Lyre-Bird-.
430 points, ended September 3, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Divine
wow reading this makes me wish i could crawl up next to you and never leave very very touching and a great take on your prompt very nicely written i loved it
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A very strong and sensual poem. Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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Thank you for entering my contest........
quite a unique take on the prompt.... very creative, great flow
Goodluck with your entry
Tracey
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Interestingly written for the chosen prompt. Memories or reality
Best of luck in the contest...Scott
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I love this for the images causes heat to rise and hot to take over.
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