Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

its as you find yourself

its wanting to be free
as you find yourself cornered and confused

its crying to be loved
as you find yourself loveless and lost

its looking to be found
as your find yourself silent and alone

its praying to be saved
as you find yourself empty and afraid

its dying to be alive
as you find yourself cold
and un-one
un-won
and un.

and its living to be one
as you find yourself nothing but none.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Kristin Melissa
    September 3, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I know exactly what your talkng about... since I'm living it right now... Great write,,, Koodles...
    Blessed be
    Mystic


    • nanashiamai
      September 3, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      thanks so much. ^_^ i'm sorry that you are living it right now. i am as well and its not a fun time, so i hate for others to have to go through it. but i'm sure we both will.

      peace,
      ~pasha