My life is spinning out of control
Drugs carve and wither my veins
Skin hangs festering and scabby
Each day I linger is pure agony
My need for pain grows by the day
I want freedom to choose my way
To cut deeply and free my blood
To let it fountain over my body
Paint myself deep bloody red
Drain this shell paper dry
Light the flame and let me die
On the edge over looking the sea
A cool breezing daring me to jump
A seagull taunts with screams
Rocks below sharp and inviting
One step and it would end quick
Onto a rocky sword blood running thick
In my room I hear the lessening splashes
Feel the warm leaving with each drop
Down my wrist through my palms
Tracing the lines falling from fingers
To the floor my life forever lingers.
By Kindredblood
Author notes
Sometimes this is how i feel when life is hitting rock bottem and the pain I am going through just gets to much.
Also written so others might feel how I feel and know they don't suffer alone.
be Honest thanx
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this is amazing... it really reflects the way a person feels in this type of situation... beautiful poem.
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AMAZING
IT IS IMPORTANT TO UNDERSTAND THE DEPTHS DEPRESSION CAN TAKE ONE SOUL...
THIS IS AN HONEST INTERPRETATION
PAINTING A PICTURE OF THE REALITY OF THE PAIN...
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Dark and Beautiful
Again amazing write my friend...well done..I love the imagery in this piece...you captured the feeling perfectly...been here done this so I identify well with this lovely write..keep up the great work
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AWWW
This is so sad. But it is a good write. I can relate to some of your feelings.Thanks for sharing. And your never alone Either always here for you chained to my computer
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A sad write. Thank you for sharing this part of you. I can feel the darkness and despair through your words. Very vivid imagery. Well written. Love it.
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