Your love
has taken
me to the
highest heaven,
and reached
down
to the
lowest
levels
and
tombs of
hell,
where you
took my hand,
and lifted me
safely back
through
to earth.
No wonder
I trust you.
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In simple words..a mysterious story of love is revealed..and this is amazing indeed..love the flow and the immageries around..well done..
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Very clear and frank.
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Very clear and frank.
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Great write this is exactly what my hubby did for me . Great write Dear
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Very nice...I'm sure He loved eery word.
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Outstanding
I likd the distinctive style of this poem and the way you have created a journey through heaven and hell and finally found trust. The short lines add a sense of depth. I liked the simplicity of this poem. Thank you for posting
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When our eyes are opened by The Light it is often not a painless process. The dark fights to keep our souls to rip it apart, but it is no match for the kind and compassionate power of The Light that will heal us after it has saved us from the talons and fangs of the dark. I saw this in this poem you wrote here and I hope many will have the same experience. Thank you for creating and sharing. May you long enjoy the Love and soothing warmth of The Light.
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I love those last two lines, it's a beautiful way to sum the way you feel up. Good stuff Duana
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Hi Jen! Wow, you are still here
It's great to hear from you!
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great
Wow such deep meaning. I loved it. I am alway a fan od poetry from the heart. You did a great job on this and you touched my heart with this beautiful write. The menaing rings true.It was truly awesome and profound.
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simplistic
This is simple but true. I like the picture of lifting up from hell to heaven. That's what God does.
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