~Humaniod

Societies eye,
weaves desire's noose...

As puppets perform

on strings of costume...

Another victim,
within the carbon

copy march.

~the synthetic humaniod's
lead the parade,
as another empty soul,
fears to footprint
upon the daggers of
self-expressed dreams...

~ Skinless shadows walk humanities cloned way ~

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Pre-writes Only~~! by Naridill. 750 points, ended December 6, 2007, 5 entries
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Naridill
December 6, 2007

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'~ Skinless shadows walk humanities cloned way ~'

Love the phrasing within this piece. A captivating piece. Length would have given it so much more life but it is quite divine as it is.

Thanks for entering
much luck
Pyper Rain
September 6, 2007

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I couldn't have said it better myself if I had to. Fantastic writing, carefully chosen words that reflect exactly how I feel about society as a whole....Your last line, what can I say...PERFECT!!!

Good luck in the contest!!!

~Rain.
Uniquely-Scarred
September 3, 2007
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i love this my first finalist, best of luck