They tell you their lies,
and you believe them.
You tell them your pain,
they pretend to listen.
Well I can't take this anymore,
so I'm closing the goddamn door.
With a razor and a gun,
i shall have some fun.
Now let me be and you will see,
what you fucking did to me.
theres nothing left that i can feel,
ive gone so numb to try to be real.
my heart is shattered once again,
only this time it wont mend my friend.
this time ill take care of it myself,
with a razor and some help.
i dont understand why it happened.
i guess i just wasnt good enough.
well am i good enough now?
dead on the floor
i truely swear... i cant take this anymore..
Please tell me what you think
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more poeple needto read poetry -
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hm y is that?
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every1s too empathetic
and people who read poetry r usually too emotional
thats bad bc emotional people cud and will bbe taken advantage of -
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thats a good reason
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great
This is really good.... I love anger poems like this.... wonderful job. just a sugesstion... line 12 would flow so much better if u replace the 2nd to with and... it just might flow better.... but still awesome job.!!!
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