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Pretty Soldier Sailor Moon

Brilliant blonde hair
Flowing carefree
From a blue-eyed
White whisperer.

A masked man,
Prince of the Earth,
Gently danced with her,
While all their worries
Melted into each other's eyes.

Suddenly their worlds
Were shaken.
The negaverse began attack,
And they were whisked away
From each other's arms.

Luna the seemingly
Fluffy mascot,
Devised a plan that
Would save Serenity,
And her faithful scouts.

They were sent to Earth.
Scattered about only
To be found again
Much later by little Luna.

Now known as Serena,
Or more commonly meatballhead.
Luna has re-introduced her destiny,
While Serena sobs away.

This trainwreck of a girl
Was once a powerful leader?
Luna was in disbelief,
But her heart's appearance
Said otherwise.

The brooch was handed to her.
Luna waited for the words.
An exilerating anticipation
Swept over them both...
Moon Prism Power!

The brooch sparkled to life,
As ribbons danced 'round Serena.
Luna knew she had found
The one who will save us all.

Now it is time to fight crime...
"And that means you!"

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shortrocker911

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  • Tarja
    October 4, 2007
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    I agree with Grave Dancer. This totally brought back memories of being a kid and thinking Sailor Moon was just the coolest chick ever! My personal favorite scout (as a kid) was Lita, or Jupiter... but today I have to say looking back I'm so much like Serena it's scary! Good luck in the contest!


  • neoladyem
    October 1, 2007
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    I love it! The flow is wonderfully done and you really capture detials in the scencery you wrote here. I love the end when you wrote "and that means you" because I remeaber hearing her say that all the time when I watch her on tv as kid when she did her great speech. Good luck in the contest.


  • whiterabbit.
    September 2, 2007

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    This is just so cute. It reminded me of being a little kid again. I love it. The first two stanzas are my favorites. Great job and thanks for your entry.