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Dying Inside Out

My heart throbbing in utter silence in the darkness.
My eyes gently pushing the tears down this pale face of mine.
The soft cries coming from deep inside.
His royal blue eyes piercing my heart.
His rough hands pushing me into the cold.
His deep voice bellowing over me.
It's all over.
The happiness.
The smiles.
The laughter.
It's all over.
My heart throbs loudly out of chest
My eyes shoving tears down this flushed face of mine.
The louds cries from deep inside burst.
Yes.
It is really over.
The happiness.
The smiles.
The laughter.
It really is over.

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  • wat2do
    September 4, 2007

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    good

    im sorry that its over, but the best thing is to not see him, it will hurt but it will be better for you. what will you do when he really leaves? its gonna happen eventuly so just b stong.