A certain shade of lavender
brings my mind back to you
and the many colors you became
on your way to blue.
The ugly red, fading to pink.
The pink itself inviting.
The fade through pale going on
to something more exciting.
The ashen, then the less than white.
I looked as you lay dieing.
You wanted this so bad, my love.
Why ever are you crying?
Did you suppose I’d stop you, love,
from having your desire?
Lavender looked good on you
though I will miss your fire.
Author notes
Sometimes, death has some color, as well.
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i like the rhyming in this write from you. i have been introduced to a fine new writer tonight and i thank you for reading my stuff, thus leading me to yours. viyanna rosemarie
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Shades of death in a light beautiful tone.
Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing my friend.
>>>VIRGOAN


