No goodbye tears
No wistful regrets
I loved with my all
Gave you my everything
Showed you my inner me
But the reciprocation was blindingly absent
Through technology's letters
I found your true love
Kisses blown, hands held, gazes given
over screens of glass and words in black and white
Your past is your evident present
My face stings from the slap of distrust
Shame and pain stream down my cheeks
Meeting under my chin in a river of disbelief.....
I loved you with my all
With no regrets
Those were my goodbye tears.....
A contest entry
- I'll Be Your Crying Shoulder ♥ Love ♥ by Flutterby--x.
530 points, ended September 22, 2007, 35 entries
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Comments
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"Kisses blown, hands held, gazes given
over screens of glass and words in black and white"
Debatable!
but those lines are lovely.
Thank you for entering!
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Aaaaww! I love my computer too and your emotions ring well. Good luck in the contest.
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Very Nice. I can actually relate to your heartbreak.
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