wallowing deeply in my dispare
watching you closly with your short blonde hair
you smile so nice and so gently too
but why did you have to be so darn rude?
my eyes are wet from crying so much
but everyday you seem to be in a rush.
you never want to talk any more that your back
but my studies are starting to slack.
because of your letter i seem to fall
because of such a let off you are having a ball.
you let me sit here and cry my eyes out
but my voice tells me to shout it all out.
you talk about your new girl
i seem to want to hurl
i need some comfort
but you seem to give me discomfort
i cried so much today because you never talk
you always think its you i stalk.
i see you everyday and you don't think
that i see you and you turn pink
Because you see me see you with another one
i don't want to this to be done
You made me cry you make me so sad
but i stayed with you even through the bad.
You looked back at me and wondered
Can she be all that bad is she the one?
I looked at you with sorrowed eyes because
you made me cry, but oh so happy.
I hold your hand only now
You have given me the chance to show you again.
I loved you and you knew
but since your back you've seemed anew.
You hate that you shund me out
but you keep me close and hold me tight.
A contest entry
- Even if the love is gone, the heartbreak is always there... by WhenWillsCollide.
1063 points, ended November 9, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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well done
this piece is very relateable
I can personally relate
although you had some spelling mistakes and the rhyme was at times forced, I thinkt hat you have successfully got your emotion across
[dnt get me wrong, my rhyme aint so hot either]
thanks for entering!

