Did I love you or did I not?
Always knew but I said I forgot
I always felt what I couldn’t say
Every minute of every day
I trusted you and went ahead
Despite what all of my friends
You said you changed
But I was deranged
My feelings for you beat in my heart
I felt them always right from the start
i think of the time we spent together
sprawled out in the misty weather
on a beach as the sun went down
I remember them and then I frown
Those memories that were so good
Are broken know I did all I could
I let you in time and time over again
I let you in till the pain drove me insane
I love you forever but not in my heart
I love you in my memories from the end to the start
Author notes
tom!!
A contest entry
- Here I Love You by tara wilson.
700 points, ended September 4, 2007, 6 entries
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Comments
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Jesus this is too powerful for me!!! When there are feelings, strong feelings involved poems are so much stronger! gd luck in the contest.
Maria
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'I love you in memories', very beautiful, thank you for this entry!
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