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Glass Stars

Left to view, only glass stars
of blinding reds and golds
under the ground with no sun
buried away, near the dwarf's holds

Forgotten Snow White, with stained smile
resting in her eternal glass coffin
with only her twinkling stars on stagnant tears

panicking breathe long ago began to soften

 

There are no princes, no knights left

to save the Snow white girl, with Glass stars

She'll just stay buried, forgotten

Forever to earn times scars

 

 

 

Author notes

I'm in a very fairtaleish mood today. Poor Snow and her eternal rest, alas she has long since been forgotten, alive but rotten.


AP user name, HopeWithWings

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  • Cherokee
    September 18, 2007
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    I have to remove it... read the rules...


    • HopeWithWings
      September 18, 2007
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      I did read the rules, I was putting my user name in the AU when you went ahead and removed it, thanks a bunch.