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Silly love song...

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Listen first, then you sing,
chasing away…the heat…
If you close your eyes,
is it the scent of me you let go?

I never sleep when I am with you,
being so stained in you
in the same room,
with so much still to say…

Do you know me better than I do,
as you breathe me in and out?
Your hands barely touching my skin…

When you’re turning me on,
do you see my body soar?
as I taste your every drop…


Are the lights still down low?
As you let me show,
my love for you is insatiable…

While the moonlight plays,
and I crawl between these sheets,
does the world revolves if I go?

Moving together up and down
our feet don't touch the floor
But I hear footsteps somewhere below...

Or is it just a silly love song,
never heard of,
but for me never stops?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

This music inspires me because of the beauty of the lyrics...my fav song is my true love dream...I seem to live in dreams a lot...

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Darren Hayes
Insatiable
When the moonlight crawls along the street
Chasing away the summer heat
Footsteps outside somewhere below
The world revolves, I let it go
We build our church above the street
We practice love between these sheets
The candy sweetness scent of you
It bathes my skin, I'm stained in you
And all I can do is hold you
There's a racing within my heart
And I am barely touching you
Turn the lights down low
Take it off, let me show
My love for you
Insatiable
Turn me on, never stop
Wanna taste every drop
My love for you
Insatiable
The moonlight plays upon your skin
A kiss that lingers takes me in
I fall asleep inside of you
There are no words, there's only truth
Breathe in breathe out, there is no sound
We move together up and down
We levitate, our bodies soar
Our feet don't even touch the floor
But nobody knows you like I do
This world it don't understand
That I grow stronger in your hands
Turn the lights down low
Take it off, let me show
My love for you
Insatiable
Turn me on, never stop
Wanna taste every drop
My love for you
Insatiable
Turn the lights down low
Take it off, let me show
My love for you
Insatiable
Turn me on, never stop
Wanna taste every drop
My love for you
Insatiable, baby
We never sleep, we're always holding hands
Kissing for hours, talking and making plans
I feel like a better man, just being in the same room
We never sleep, there's just so much to do
So much to say, can't close my eyes
When I'm with you
Insatiable
The way I'm loving you
Turn the lights down low
Take it off, let me show
My love for you
Insatiable
Turn me on, never stop
Wanna taste every drop
My love for you
Insatiable
Turn the lights down low
Take it off, let me show
My love for you
Insatiable
Turn me on, never stop
Wanna taste every drop
My love for you
Insatiable, baby
When I look in your eyes...



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  • Warrior7
    November 15, 2008

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    This is spectacular Jeannette, it would have to be my favorite poem of yours. Simply breathtaking, very well done and deserving of the gold


  • ml12
    November 15, 2008

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    This was great! The poem drifted off for me towards the end but otherwise it was beautifully written and I thank you for entering my contest. Cheers


    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      November 15, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the Gold....sometimes dreams can come true...


  • Beating gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    "Do you know me better then I do,"
    In this line I'm pretty sure it should be "than" instead of "then".
    Honestly, I didn't bother reading the lyrics that you got inspired by, and really I don't have to. Your poem really speaks for itself, and I love how you end it with hearing the love song. It's kind of uncertain, but still it makes it so much more romantic yet so full of lust. I really like that!

  • Sunbreathes...ra
    September 3, 2007

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    love the SONG it is one of my favorites. thsi piece i dripping with sensuality I daresay that I love it very much

    Do you know me better then I do,
    as you breathe me in and out?
    Your hands barely touching my skin…

    When you’re turning me on,
    do you see my body soar?
    as I taste your every drop…


  • Whoochi gold member
    September 2, 2007

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    Absolutely gorgeous are the words you have penned here my friend..My fav was this "While the moonlight plays and I crawl between these sheets does the world revolve..." Excellent job...good luck


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    September 2, 2007

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    beautiful.....

    i love the way music is so inspiring, i often find my muse hiding in the music too.

    great job here and best of luck in the contest twinny

    Tasha
    xo

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