when it's overcast
caretaker; switch off the sun
let's save energy
Author notes
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It's amazing, energy saving has become part of our lives... when I go out of my office even for a lunch, I switch off the lights....
I was prompted, whilst other day I was walking around the lake, the weather was overcast... the sky was packed with thick quilt of clouds... just a sily thought occured in my mind, "though it's cloudy but the sun is still shining the other side the clouds... what a waste of energy that is"...
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- MORE HAIKU ANYONE? by Swan song.
800 points, ended September 8, 2007, 32 entries
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nice one here
your notes make it even funny
thank you for I needed lessons with a laugh
Riftkin -
whitty!
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Amazing
Fantastic Mina. A little words can ever mean so much is a wonder that I have discovered just now reading your poem. Wonderful imagery of switching of the sun when the sky is overcast. You are indeed the grandmaster of beautiful Haikus. Keep it up.
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this was very different i have not seen a haiku like this before i like it cause its different stepping outside the norm bit holding form lovely work
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GOOD
Very simple and to the point. Enjoyed it
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