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Wishing You Well

Come with me,
I'll take you
away.

To a land
without
ills.

Everyone
will be at
play,

running naked,
over hills.

You're wildest
dreams will
come true,

just lie back
and wish...

See! I told you!
Now you are a fish!

Be careful what
you ask for,

So the saying goes.
Or you'll end up
with two heads,
and maybe six toes.

My land of enchantment
is waiting now for you.

And my suggestion is;
Just wish it's not the flu!

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    September 2, 2007

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    LOL This is hilarious. It made me laugh so loud. I hope it is not the flu either. Had that a year or 2 ago and it was no fun. This is an awesome poem. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.