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the morning after

she broke his heart years ago
but he kept loving her anyway
their friendship was her rock
he saw her through everything
as he did last night
when for once she was the one
with the broken
heart
he held her in his arms
as tightly as he could
and gently kissed away
all of her tears
she began to kiss him back
and the comfort soon turned
into a passion
neither one could control
they had sex,
and they made love
like they had always
been together
the morning after
she broke his heart again
and like before
he kept loving her anyway
their friendship was their rock
they saw each other through everything
as they did
last night

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  • fleur de lys
    September 20, 2007
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    Great imagery. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.


  • LadyKate
    September 3, 2007

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    This is a very intersting poem, it sounds like you are telling a story! thank you for entering and good luck


  • forbidden-colour
    September 2, 2007
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    Awh.
    so sad ]:

    Thank you for entering
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