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Summer

Summer is here
School is out
The sun will appear
That's what it's all about

Is it the wonderful beauty,
That makes me glad
Or that No one has any duties?
And You see your dad
(every day)

Endless days of swimming
Everyday hanging out
The lights are dimming
And everyone has to shout

It's about time
For you to have fun
And no one has to work part-time
And I like to run

Everyone swim
Everyone play
No one go to Gym
I's time for me to go away

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This is for Summer lovers!

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  • transit
    September 21, 2008

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    ooo

    A lovely poem on summer. The imagery is very nice and I almost wanted to be there. The rhyme was good too and the breezy feel was very nice to read.

    transit~


  • Tabitha-Robin
    September 2, 2007

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    Wonderful write and great style and form. I think you write well. Great job. Keep it up. I hope you are doing well and God bless you this day.

    Tabitha