I love you because of the way that you smell
I love you because of the way you excel
I love you because of the way you fell
I love you because you like to keep it real
I love you because you shine like the sun
I love you because you make me number one
I love you because of whats inside your mind
I love you because your big ol' behind
I love you because look of your hair
I love how it looks when it blows in the air
I love you because of your little tiny feet
I love you because you make complete
I love you because we became a team
I love you because youre sweet like ice cream
I love you because you know where I hurt
I love you because you always put me first
I love you because you make me wanna rhyme
I love you because you make me worth your time
I love you because im who you wanna see
I love you because youre where I wanna be
A contest entry
- This is true love by darrylblacksr.
850 points, ended September 16, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is for Precious (again)
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WHAT?! Now you know your girl was feelin' this! How did I miss this one. I've been sleepin' on my boy, huh? LOL. but I'm back. It won't happen again. Keep them coming, Tre! Holla at your girl. Talk to you soon! - cgirl0410
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keep up the good work
This is a really sweet poem. I like the rhyme scheme
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Indeed this is a good poem, line three was kind of confusing to me: I love you because of the that you fell; other than that it was a good poem especially the rhyme scheme... Good luck in the contest...
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aw wow,Ilove this..this one some one gave you an insite to other types of poetry... you really suprised me with this post,thank you for showing me the real you...thank you for being you...good luck in this contest,SH...
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This is really sweet, I still have trouble rhyming most of the time...not my style but you carried it off well. She must really inspire you. God luck in the contest.
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