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weighing it out!

 

 

The weight of loss you could never compare

to the weight of gain unless you've been there.

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For loss can outweigh gain without a thought

yet in school, that's not what we were taught.

But life is not always just what it seems

and "True loss" can shatter many A'mans dreams.

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This loss that's carried on someone’s heart

is impossible to lift when it's been torn all apart.

So give me a mountain, ask me to move away

and I shall move it somehow or, ...Someway.

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Show me a child that breathes no more

I'll give you a loss you can never prepare for.

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The question is which's heavier of "Loss or Gain"

well I think an answer lies in unbelievable pain.

 

 

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You've been invited your prompt is;  the weight of loss and gain,

                                                                       compare them, which is heavier?

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 18, 2007

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    i like this and think you did a great job my friend. and i will say i like the question you asked at the end, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • alexandrathegreat
    September 9, 2007

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    I think you have summed up the question and discovered an answer beautifully. You've done a nice job with this explored it in the heart and found the answer that works for you, thank you for accepting the invitation.


  • ebaby
    September 2, 2007
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    lost to me but then too others it could be gain.... Interesting question...