Sunshine, clouds, rippling trees,
air that flows upon the breeze.
As far as the eye could see,
not one person would there be.
It would be my special place,
where only I, myself could grace.
I would be happy all alone,
this special place would be my home.
Nobody there to bother me,
from now till all eternity.
Not another would there be
my special place is just for me.
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Wouldn't it be divine to have a special place?
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This is very nice! I reeally like that you took the time to share with us all your special place. But I do have one thing to say...HaHaHaHa now that I know where it is I will be able to go there, and now you won't be alone there....I am only kidding. It is nice to have a place to your self, every one needs one. But I don not necisaarily think it is a good idea to be in a place by your slef for eternity, with out human interaction we could never learn and grow and strive to reach our full potential, but I guess that is just my opinion! Anyway I really enjoyed reading your peice and I am glad you enterd it. Great job and good luck in the contest!
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Very Good
"Nobody there to bother me," - I can relate to this wish.
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