I can't help the way I feel,
You think I'm out of order.
But this is what life has taught me,
that family has no order.
The liar, the theif,
the spoilt little bitch.
The poor one, the odd one,
the one that is rich!
I especially hate the one who abuses kids,
so excuse me that I won't go near.
I know you love your family
but I'm trying to be sincere.
I cannot abide the way they see us,
we're the best out of the lot.
But they don't ever see that,
they just think we've lost the plot.
But we are kind and caring,
our child has gone unspoiled,
We may be poor but we're happy,
and our love remains unsoiled.
Please tell me what you think
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You go girl!
LOL!
An excellent write rich with wisdom and rhyme!
Don't you find money to be a great downfall for so many? You have painted a wonderful portrait that is sadly realistic in todays world.
My your child continue to know the love of parents...
and not gold...as she continues her journey.
Beautifully penned and profound!
Blessings! Tammy
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I think I needed this poem, today...this minute. Thank you for sharing it. It really hits home as true. Love, D
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Aww thankyou so much, I think it helps when your looking for emotional/Spiritual answers and these things come along. Glad it was right time and place here.
Thanks again.
~K~
if u ever need to chat............>>>>
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awesome
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Thankyou angel. Your comment is much appreciated xxx
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How completly true! I especaially love the last stanza - our standing in life as nothing to do with who we are as people. Surprisingly - alot of the times the poor are the best ones of society. Great job =)
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Many thanks for your comment. It is actually aimed at my inlaws. They have 2 granddaughters and the other one gets treated better thn ours, but our daughter is nice and kind and caring, the other is horrible and spoilt and used tears to get what she wants... it annoying!!!
thanks for dropping by ~K~ -
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Oh gosh - thats horrible. It's really not fair...and I hope that one day that your inlaws will one day realize how they are missing =)
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