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Thank You (and Please) Lord

Thank you Lord for my family
They ALL mean so much to me

Thank you Lord for my health
It is so much more important than wealth

Thank you Lord for my personality
It is wonderful to be able to notice goodness in all I see



Please Lord help me to learn not to be so cranky
I hate hurting everybody

Please Lord help me to find a job
I hate mooching at home like a slob

Please Lord help me to be a wonderful wife and mother
I hope I can be as great as my mom and grandmother

Author notes

This is a poem I wrote a few months ago... I now have a job and I'm not so cranky so God helped me with those two things!!!

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  • shadowofmyself5
    September 3, 2007

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    This is great. I love how you start out with thanking God, and then later move on to asking for help - exactly how prayer should be =)