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Ten Words

ten words
are few,
but are
enough
to break
hearts.

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10 words. I give you a poem of ten words, about ten words.

A contest entry

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  • Norman Crabtree
    November 2, 2007

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    i had to write one of these for a contest recently, its hard to do bt rarely comes up with good results, trust me!

  • Virgoan
    September 10, 2007

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    10 words can change a life. We experience it, most of the time unnoticed.

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck

    >>>VIRGOAN


  • NoWayJo
    September 7, 2007
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    I like how you took the very contest theme of "ten words" and drew it into your poem, Penciled. Also, I don't know if was intentional on your part, but the lay-out does somewhat resenble a heart which could appear quite broken if to allow additional spaces between some words.

    Best wishes to you in contest!

    Jo

  • Leaving Today
    September 7, 2007
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    hmm....very very right.