I think of the things you say
think about them everyday.
Hopefully there not a game,
the game a guy spits to get his way.
You seem real.Real enough to believe, but see,
the thing is to me,
a guy lies
bullshits and cries to get into my pants and my mind.
Im not being scandalous, just being straight.
See like they say
there's a thin line between love and hate.
Whatever you do dont cross that line,
coz once you do, that's the end of this fucked up life.
All Im saying is I hope you are true.
Fuck cute, fuck sweet, with me you gotta be real,
or just forget you even know me.
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this one I hate, its just seems...stupid and doesnt flow, but you get that
Please tell me what you think
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I don't think this is stupid at all and I actually like that the flow is a bit rocky because I think it gives more feel to the 'be real' moral you're lecturing about. This is a great poem.
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