my heart aches for what it had but was ripped away
wants a lover to return love, a lover to stay
someone for me that will care and protect
instead of the usual heart breaking reject
I need arms around me to hold me still
to inject me with love till I've had my fill
to make me feel special to make me feel real
not like the last, love wasn't in that deal
at least it was from me but not from him
I loved him with my heart and with every limb
I want that again but returned this time
I want someone who I cant talk to so I don't have to mime
I want it I need it
but this pain I cant forget
where is cupid when you need him
Author notes
this is about tom again!!!
to the guy running to contest!!
im wrighting about wanting to find new love option 2!!
so sorry to hear you got your heart broken!! it really sucks im in the same boat as you!!
A contest entry
- I'm Boredd....Lots of Options. by XStuckInANightmareX.
1000 points, ended September 2, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Yeah, after what just happened on msn between me nd ois, this actually made me feel it even more, and maybe a tear or two were shed!
i no wat hapened to me cant reli compare, but i did lik him. anyway this isnt bout me!!
The rhyme fits perfectly, and actually looksgreat! evn tho u cant rely see the writing with the backround nd all.. :S
Lots of kisses and gd luck in the contest!
MAria xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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I enjoyed this piece because it had a sort of humor to it that I liked. I also liked the story told in this poem. I thought you did a good job, All star.
I also liked the flow and wording of this poem. It was too bad that you didn't win some prize, but there are plenty of contests in the future you can try out... and hopefully win.
Keep up the good work!
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This good. I like it. Great job n good luck. ♥
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