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wont leave

all the thoughts that fly through my head
none makes any sense
why cant i keep this at bay
all these thoughts will not go away
they wont give me peace
i want to go to sleep
but the thoughts wont leave
thoughts about me
thoughts about you..

*to be continued*

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  • Samantha-.
    September 4, 2007

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    wow. I like this and I'm sure the final version will be even better. I loved this first part, it had so much heart and soul. I love it.