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Fallen Angel

An angel
Chained and abused by blasphemy
A being so charming and beautiful
Outcasted and unwanted by sin
So sad and alone
For every sin against God
There is a link
An example of faith
As the fallen angel looks towards the heavens
She silently prays for forgiveness

A contest entry

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  • poet360
    May 3

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    wow you have infused this with so much imagery, metaphors, and powerful details. the brevity is perfect, and you said so much with so little words.
    good job


  • Commodore Rouge
    April 12

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    I like this! The imagery is good, and for some reason, this reminds me of some sentimental book I used to read all the time as a kid. I can't think of the name of it, though this represents what I'm thinking of perfectly! Great job, my dear!


  • medicalpoet
    September 13, 2008
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    good work

    good luck.


  • harajukuprincess
    November 5, 2007

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    A nice little piece. it makes me almost think of when lucifer was cast from heaven. I hate to do it but i have to DQ you from my contest beacuse of the spelling. I am sorry it was a lovely peice and I do thank you for the entry. ~~Hara


  • Hebz
    September 4, 2007

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    WOW!!

    Very good imaginary, I like it so much.

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Heba


  • Forlorn Dreams
    September 2, 2007

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    This is a wonderful piece, very detailed and an amazing poem to go with the picture. I really enjoyed how you brought everything together, very creative. I really loved your outlook and opinion on this. Clever idea, and even more so since you couldnt see the picture! Great work! Thanks for entering and best wishes!

    Kelcey

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