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Our First Night






Candlelit silhouettes, dancing against the wall,
Breathing intensifying, as we inhale the scent of passion.
Flames flickering within them brown eyes,
Love raging a passageway, from your windows
To that of my soul

Butterflies, a million or so,
Encouraging the rhythms of my heart,
It beats rapidly, as they spread their wings about.
With every caress of your hands, they flutter wildly,
Then becoming breathless, as you kiss me tenderly.

Your hands gentle, warm, as you brush my skin,
Embracing me as if I was fine china, you lift me.
Eyes locked, fire within them combined,
One solid flame, engulfing the hearts we share.
We are that of a raging heat wave, committed by Texas loving.

Your body leans in, laying me delicately upon the bed,
Slowly you undress me, each finger lingering cautiously,
Across the curves of my blouse,
Teasing warm flesh beneath it, they become alert.
Your smile bringing such an emotion, I become motionless.

Laying there awaiting your finish,
You hover over me, gently resting your body to mine.
Nerves running crazy, my mouth opens but no sound.
Your lips fell upon mine, eruption of heat spread over them,
Passion soaring from your heart to my mouth.

Tongues exploring, your lips gently nibbling mine
As your hands softly caress my cheeks, my chin, my eyes.
Carefully, you tour the rest of me,
Leaving a hot trail, across the many curves of my flesh.
Excited I become, as you take your time in pleasuring me.

Spreading the passageway of my love canal,
You kiss my lips, your hands gently escorting you in.
For the first time in my life, anyone has crossed my sacred garden,
It was tonight, as we bring a new chapter of unity,
Engaging in the gift of God, we made love, cherishing our first time

As husband and wife.



Author notes

anything about love

Written with love and passion, for what it will be like, making love for the first time,to be actually in love.
As husband and wife..a shred precious unity, not sex, but romance and passion

Love you hun

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  • mantis180
    September 11, 2007

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    This is a beautiful write. I hope it really is that good for you, love and passion, not just sex

    Ash


  • xxAshleyNicolexx
    September 2, 2007
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    aww thats was sooo sweet, i really love it, great job!!!!!!!!


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 2, 2007

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    awesome write my dear friend romance is deff in the air and hearts - my many blessings for both of you always and forever


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 2, 2007

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    woah awsome write
    i should really chck before i read or ill get in trouble lol
    sensual and hot write thought
    well de and best of luck.


  • Griswold silver member
    September 2, 2007

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    WOW, what a very sensual and Hot write baby, and it will be so. In fact a little hotter than this probably. Love You baby...Scott

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