Up along the city skyline
We sit to watch the sunset
Dont have to talk
It's just you and me
Relaxing
Under the sun's warm glow
Waiting until the oportune moment
To make the day just perfect
To seal it with a kiss
Before we go our seperate ways
Up among the city skyline
Where it's quiet and calm
Just you and me
Soaking up the moment
This perfect moment
Where the world feels so far away
Where one day becomes another
In our favourite spot
At our favourite time
Sunset
Under the sun's warm glow
As the sky turns orange, pink and purple
Up around the city skyline
It's turning dark
To spend the rest of time up here
With you would make me happy
As we sit and enjoy the moment.
The moment takes a new dimension
You ask me to marry you
The moment is now truly perfect
Author notes
This isnt exactly 'pretty' as such, I'd say it's more beautiful, and dreamlike...
A contest entry
- Lovely by Annalise.
450 points, ended September 2, 2007, 23 entries
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Truley = truly.
You've written a nice setting, and a nice ending to that setting.
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thanks for the heads up and compliment Ampd
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