If you were to die tomorrow where would you go?
Heaven sounds nice but do you truly know,
That when you leave this wretched place,
that is where you'll be?
Do you have doubts about your so called beliefs?
This answer is in a book so many people ignore,
the book's everywhere, just look in a hotel drawer.
There are many religions that lie and mislead,
these created by man and the evil he seeks.
The deception and greed, the flesh that we feed,
will all come to an end, then where will you be?
You'll be in one of two places, there's heaven or hell,
when the end is no man can tell.
The final day of judgement you should truly fear,
the sentence is eternity, not a county year!
You'll have no attorney to help you plead your case,
but this judge is different, He's full of love and grace!
He sent His only Son to die for our sins,
we tortured and killed Him like He was no friend.
This man's name is Jesus and he's coming again,
He'll take us who believe in Him to the pearly gates,
the entrance where our Creator awaits!
Here, there's no pain, no evil, no sin.
just eternal happiness with our Father and friends.
The answer is simple, now can you see?
If you'd just read that book then you'd believe!
You'll learn that Jesus is The Way, you just have to have faith;
He died for our sins, we live under his grace.
This book is called the Bible, you can have one for free,
just go to a church, they won't charge a fee!
Written by: Matthew William Stavron/2006
Author notes
by:stavykm, This is a poem that was my son's first poem ever written. It happened while he was sitting in jail for several months and had surrendered all to God. We laughed at a county year and no attorney to plead your case. This is the truth from someone in jail, MY SON ,he asked me to type it and put it on my site. Thank you everyone for your encouraging words about my son and I. A lot of my poetry is on the pain of enduring drug addiction to it's exstreme from a mothers stand point!! He was been my inspiration.Four months later I wrote my first poem, God's Not Done With Me Yet. Thank you all for your support!!
A contest entry
- For Poets with 5 or Less Trophys by Starz of Heaven.
550 points, ended September 6, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Magnify The Lord!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Talking Toni.
1000 points, ended March 31, 2008, 27 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Where will you go ??
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This poem is very touching and I'll keep you in my prayers. The scripture at Psalms 37:29. And John 5:28,29 is very inspiring. Take a look if you have the chance.
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death is painful but when i read a poem like this I get comfort coz I know the poet is in heaven. I think it is a way of keeping you in Christ too because at the end you want to go where he went and be with him forever.
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Well I don't have to look far to see where he got his talent for creating amazing poems sis. Reading this, anyone can see that he was embracing God. Don't worry about him sis, he is in good hands now. I love you!
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Perfect...
There is no doubt God has fulfilled his promise to your son.
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It's heartwarming when we know that our child has accepted God into their life. Mathew was so fortunate to have laid his soul before God and turned his life around.
I know you must treasure this beautiful poem, Kel. I can certainly see how it became your inspiration to write.
We reap so many rewards in life and the sucess and faith of our children is probably the most wonderful reward of all.
love and
Dee
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MAGNIFICENT
wow, how cool this must have been as a parent, to know that your kid knows the truth... there can be no greater joy. Now you know that one day you will meet again. thank you so much for sharing this with me. Contrary to my belief, this piece needs no editing... it was divinely written just the way it is... okay, I might change one thing... i might call it "Divine Providence". Your son is doing something very cool, changing the world without even being here... how many of us don't think we can effect anything ... and we are still here.!!!! Funny how things wew think are terrible burdens (like a trip to the pokey) may actually (in an eternal perspective) turn out to be our greatest blessing? I have experienced that myself. Thanks Kelle, keep pressing on... do not weary in well-doing.... Kevin
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True Confession!
"He works all things to the good of those who love Him, to those called according to His purpose". Paraphrase of Ro 8:28 NT There's nothing like time in the slammer & access to the Bible to bring one to one's senses!
What a great testimony for those who are struggling with addictions & sin. Look at how your son sought his Redemption & how he affected you, inspiring you to write & to go into Ministry. This is a major blessing, though born through pain. Most of the great things in this life are accomplished through the growth brought on by pain. Pain is a great teacher! Love is the best. The Creator is Love & our job in life is to learn of Him, His Love & how to embody it & share it with others. Blessings to you in your future work! He's not done with any of us & He's not willing that any perish. 
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Thank you so much Kathleen for this message meant the world to me. It brought tears to my eyes. It just shows how much he loved the Lord doesn't it. We love and adore the Lord as well or we wouldn't be called to do this ministry that my son originally wanted to start, after he death. We were planning to do it while he was still alive but God is using his life now in a different way and boy am I learning a lot.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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Oh this is truly awesome sister... heart felt and inspirational with faith shining bright! I am bookmarking this so I can read it from time to time as a reminder. Your son was wise beyond his years and a true and faithful believer! This piece has blessed me more than I can say and showed me the depths of his spiritual soul! Thanks for sharing this! Wonderful, simply wonderful!
Blessings,
Sister Frog~
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Profound Truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know I have already cmented on this before, but it is the erfect entry for my contest as it shouldn't take hitting the bottom to really understand what he did for us but sometimes it does..I can sooooo relate to this poem. Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~ -
Wow Kelle.....
Matthew did a marvelous job on this and it is a great soul winning tool!!! I can see where he got his ability to write poetry...from his momma who writes incredible. I guess when you are in jail yu have aot f tie to think and realize the truth and the things that really matter ...like your slavation!!! tHANKS FOR SHARING A PART OF YOUR SON WITH ME TODAY!!!~~Toni~~
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He died for our sins we live under his grace
This book is called the Bible you can have one for free
Just go to a church they won't charge a fee
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I actually liked this.There is this song that says that you are an eagle and that even tho your wings are visible right now the feahters will grow back,that have been beaten but you dont give up because dying from pain/depression isnt part of who you are and thats what i beleive of you by knowing your poetry.i dont know what it feels like to have someone you love die,but am sure that you and your family will be fine in due time.
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Nicely written. I like the way you offered a very harsh question, but backed it up with God's eternal love, not condemnation. Good work, poet.
*finalist*
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Very nice write. A good free verse style. It has the good message. After my life is over I will be going to heaven to live with my Jesus, and others, forever.
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This is a really nice write. You made it enjoyable and I like that you said straigt facts without being preacy and pushing your beliefs on others.This is very good.Goodluck in the contest.Best Wishes
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Hi I already commented on this one , I still think you did a great job God bless you Kimmy
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Very spiritual.
My first impression is of the depth of truth in the words you have penned. Emotionally I can feel your spirituality in every word you write. There is nothing awkward about this and not a word should be changed. My favorite part is verse six however all of this is somwell written that there is no part that i didn't like. The title Says it all and the first line compliments the title. The last line sums this in a very true way. I loved this. You are truly one of Gods' children. Bless you.
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Your faith shines like a beacon from the words of this poem
I did wondered if the first line on stanza 6 should infact be a last line in stanza 5? Excellent poem
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I feel your passion for your faith. I am a Christian but believe there are many paths to God, since He created us all. As you pointed out "this judge is different he's full of love and grace". Luckily for us, God is more merciful and forgiving to us, then we tend to be toward one another. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. ....JustBreathe
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This was written with a true conviction of your beliefs without judging those that may not believe the same as you...You were passing along wonderful, free, information.
I wish the best for you and many blessings.
Soulful Woman
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Oh, this is so beautiful. I mean it when I say that this was done very well. You have such an immense felling to your words. Flowing. It gave me a great feeling so it is Art to me. You asked me about what type of poetry or style I write in, I do know there are 5 but i am not in tune or am I aware of how you would categorise mine. Who knows where it comes from, I know it doesnt come as often as I like, dreams, memories, it's really just a diversions, some sort of entertainment, may be just a preoccupation with the past or the future. I sort of like to write in universal terms, a little bit there for every body, and if you find nothing, that's alright to, at least you read it , it gave you some sort of feeling. It can mean nothing to many and everything to one person, and that's not a bad thing, especially for that one person. Well I hope to read more, and I cant see why not, I thorough enjoyed this piece, you have much to be grateful for.Your gift to us. Thankyou.
BLESSINGS ALWAYS,
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This is really good! Not many people can do religious poems good, but this is great!
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This is a really good poem, I liked reading this it reminded me of some of my daddy's poems (spiritual poet)
I miss being on AP so I hope I get to read more from you now that I am back, God Bless you
Kimmy
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The Truth !! Well spoken well written !!
This will be a inspiration to most , to me Yes i believe !
I am proud of your boldness you have a gift to share and you shared it so well!
Hugs and Love,
~Lisa~
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nice poem. great write. how do you come up with all these ideas? i guess i have writer's block. got any pointers. can't wait for more of your poems. this is so true too. -
Lovely inspiring words Stavy. Well done. Val
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wonder if each of us tried to answer that question what we sould come up with - what would our answer be? Liked your apprach to this answer in your poem, some rhyme and off rhyme, rhythm and good flow to these lines. It's faith that keeps us strong and helps us survive those troubled times when we feel we can't go on. Well written.
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EXCELLENT AND HEART FELT
So true indeed this write couldnt be written more perfect . Sometimes we think popularity is what we need yet all along if you think about it ,is it really me to do as others instead of myself where you put your faith up on a shelf when life is so wonderful if you just ask and he will be there for you no matter the task . Show love and love shall be returned Help others and in turn help yourself Loved this poem it really got my thoughts flowing on how I can help others today God Bless
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Very good message You seem to be capturing the flow of poetry here. Good delivery on your message simple rhyme and yet effective
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good job
It started off very strong "If you were to die tomorrow where would you go?" and all through told the truth of Gods love and acceptance of each of us if we will just humble ourselves and bow before God. Your poems is full of truth and well done. I saw a couple of mispelled words but thats not so important to me. I got the meaning and message. Well done and God bless you, Mark
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A very powerful writing and message you've sent into the world. This has beautiful rhythm and flow. 'because the sentence is enternity and not a county year', love that line! It's so real and honest. Great write.
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