Electric bill way too high
Wish I had one of those whirly
things that twist and turn in the sky.
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE 10/20/10 by jasminerose.
525 points, ended September 2, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short yet absolutely descriptive; sings a song with the rhyming of the first and last lines and tells an interesting story as well, story about living in the city. This is way too cute.Nice job.
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Congratulations on your bronze trophy! Geez Woman! You are too good, if only I had HALF the talent as you do, I would truly be alright in my writing career... seriously!
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Congrats on your lovely award
A wonderful write so true for most of us! Have a great day, Ken IBT 
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great!
I loved it. It was quick, it made me laugh, and it's really just all together overly entertaining. And I love how you avoid calling it what it was.. and instead saying 'whirly things'. Really loved it. Great job for something so short!
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Yes it would be great to have one to save on energy There are 11 just up the road from me, but the electric goes 400 miles from here
, I'll have to build my own, lol. Best wishes in the contest, Ken IBT
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A wonderful take on the prompt..lol
Thank you for entering my contest!
Jasminerose
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