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glutton









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I am a glutton for your words


my insatiable hunger
to feast
upon your voice


leaves me devastated and ravenous

because the one thing I desire
is the one thing I'm refused.

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  • Miss Faith
    September 8, 2007
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    love, love, love this one darling...


  • DrunktankLullaby
    September 5, 2007

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    fuck yes.
    this makes me want to scream,
    "FUCKING CALL ME, ASSHOLE. JUST LET ME HEAR YOU FOR FIVE MINUTES. TWO, EVEN. 30 FUCKING SECONDS WOULD SUFFICE."
    but yeah. I guess what I'm trying to say is that... I relate to this, and therefore... like it a lot. Veyr very well done.


  • LadyAmalthea
    September 3, 2007

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    Yuppppp been there. I absolutely cannot stand like sweet infatuous loving. It hurts me because I cant stand being away from them it tears me up. So painful. I like it fun ^-^. Anyway this rocks, and so does your neon coral colorz. ALl your words here are sooooo creative and fit the mood of this perfect.

    o.0


  • A n u k e t
    September 2, 2007
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    wow, nicely done. I like this one darling. <3


  • makeout kid
    September 2, 2007

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    powerful ending.
    short and sweet. but the ending really gets your point across.
    beautiful, baby.
    <333


  • Cherokee
    September 2, 2007
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    Excellent.

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