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Impossible


Don Quixote's
silhouette
shadows soul.

Ignoring dogs
barking
it is always night.

Chasing their phantoms,
catching fire
they never feel.

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Prompt - windmill wishes

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  • crimsondew
    September 2, 2007
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    Wonderful take mixing it with Don Quixote!Love it!


    • penman gold member
      September 2, 2007
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment


  • Namita
    September 2, 2007

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    Wow. Stellar poem. The last lines were awesome.

    "Don Quixote's shilouette shadows soul"

    Silhouette, maybe?
    Great job and congrats on the greenie.

    Candy


  • jasminerose
    September 1, 2007
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    A beautiful take on the prompt given!!!
    Thank you for entering my contest!
    Jasminerose


    • penman gold member
      September 2, 2007
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment.

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