Patchwork Promises
Elated heart
Endearing love
Elluded reality
Echoing whispers
Resounding sincerity
Musical madness
Broken chords
Cycling lies
Shattering dreams
Author notes
Prompt: Windmill Wishes
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE 10/20/10 by jasminerose.
525 points, ended September 2, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ah, the rise and fall effect, up one minute down the next,, good piece.
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well written my friend
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A wonderful take on the prompt given!!
Thank you for entering my contest!
Jasminerose
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